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Re: Falling to Pieces (Death Metal)
Wow. I can already feel it pounding in my ears. Awesome job. I like the chorus. :smt109 Peacee _Writing for love is a passion_ ~lexie~
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: If you did
I stared at your window across the street and thought , Do you love me? After a long time I came to a conclusion. You wouldn't have forced all those ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye
awesome job! Your emotion rolls off of this in waves, I love it. You described yourself quite well, I shall say. So cheers to you! _Writing for love is a ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 7
review please
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Presidential Inauguration
I think that his speech was poetic. I didn't like him at first, but I realized that he will be good for this dreadful economy! =]
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 7
***sorry about the short length, The next chapter will be longer.*** The jolt of pain and fear saturated me from head to toe as I felt Emily’s powerful emotions. All ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 6
*** I need to know if I'm laying on the whole love thing too thick. I dont think that I am, but, ya know how it is.*** Alexis I blinked, ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 5
Oops, sorry. my dad gets bent out of shape if he sees me swearing. And in the next chapter you will see why Alexis doesn't really feel anything, like hurt ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 5
We were devastated. Hurt. Betrayed. They were understatements. Carly had cut us to the core of our existence. I silently prayed that no one would die of heartbreak. I was ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Indunian Story
Okay, this was interesting. I'm not quite sure I understand it yet, so I'll try my best to review. #1. Your description was awesome. I think that I want to ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Instinct
Oh, wow. Zombies? Awesome! It was unique to me. I thought that he was maybe a vampire or something, and then, it's like, BAM! And I understood. Your descriptions were ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: OMFG, it's a pen that's exploding!
New York is awesome!
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: First Kiss, edit
It was a pretty restaurant. We had picked a back table in a nook, further away from the talking and people, and where the candle was almost brighter than the ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 4
As my friends walked out of my house to transform, I grabbed the last map that we would need. I started walking, but something fell out of the map. I ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Banished (working title)
Wow. A strange twist in your story. 8) I'm hooked already! :D I saw no grammar mistakes, but that doesn't mean anything.... :lol: Anyways, nice story. I'm looking forwards to ...
Dec 31, 2008
